
Wednesday, May 09, 2007
Tuesday, May 08, 2007
Monday, May 07, 2007
I Think But Am Not
“They Shoot Poets – Don’t They?” - turns two in blog years this month. That’s 10 in muse years and about several hundred posts later. I guess that the fact that I lasted this long means that I must be doing something right or am just too dense to realize that I’m dead in the water. My money is on the second alternative.
What have I learned in the last two years? Well it’s been a bumpy ride and I wanted to throw in the towel a couple of times. This was compounded (in the past year) by my wife’s health problems, my dad’s passing, some legal hassles pertaining to our family business & my own health issues. This period also saw me mired in the longest drought of my short career. You can stop clapping now - I’m outta the slump in a big way!
The experience, however, has not completely lived up to my own expectations. There are some things that I might have done differently. I.E.:
1- This is not (admittedly) a “Thinking-Person’s” blog. The tenor of my blog has veered away from its initial intent. My original premise was to make it less frivolous & more focused on poetics and the poets & poems which give me pause. Whereas, I am no MFA graduate, I have been told that I am adept at critique and literary commentary. Therefore, in keeping with the spirit with which the blog was conceived (and what in essence got me here) – I will attempt to get off my laurels (mainly because I have perceived that I have none to sit on) and post more literary commentary and reviews. (Send me your work if you want to humor me.)
2 - Except for the NaPoWriMo experience this past month – this blog has taken me away from my creative writing instead of contributing to it. I don’t quite understand the mechanics of this just yet – but somehow this is true. Instead of stimulating my creative drive it somehow derails my poetic impetus (believe me that can hurt). Reading and critiquing poetry are what got the old creative juices going in the past.
3 – I have become too caught up with the popularity of this blog. Somehow along the way this blog has become its own entity. It constantly hungers to be fed more and more outlandish posts. Instead of allowing me to receive pats on the back it has become more of a monkey on my back. You see I’m even referring to it in the third person – already!
4 – Ergo, the blog needs to undergo changes and this might well start with cosmetic surgery. I might change its proverbial skin so that I might feel better in my own.
Turn on, tune in or drop out!
What have I learned in the last two years? Well it’s been a bumpy ride and I wanted to throw in the towel a couple of times. This was compounded (in the past year) by my wife’s health problems, my dad’s passing, some legal hassles pertaining to our family business & my own health issues. This period also saw me mired in the longest drought of my short career. You can stop clapping now - I’m outta the slump in a big way!
The experience, however, has not completely lived up to my own expectations. There are some things that I might have done differently. I.E.:
1- This is not (admittedly) a “Thinking-Person’s” blog. The tenor of my blog has veered away from its initial intent. My original premise was to make it less frivolous & more focused on poetics and the poets & poems which give me pause. Whereas, I am no MFA graduate, I have been told that I am adept at critique and literary commentary. Therefore, in keeping with the spirit with which the blog was conceived (and what in essence got me here) – I will attempt to get off my laurels (mainly because I have perceived that I have none to sit on) and post more literary commentary and reviews. (Send me your work if you want to humor me.)
2 - Except for the NaPoWriMo experience this past month – this blog has taken me away from my creative writing instead of contributing to it. I don’t quite understand the mechanics of this just yet – but somehow this is true. Instead of stimulating my creative drive it somehow derails my poetic impetus (believe me that can hurt). Reading and critiquing poetry are what got the old creative juices going in the past.
3 – I have become too caught up with the popularity of this blog. Somehow along the way this blog has become its own entity. It constantly hungers to be fed more and more outlandish posts. Instead of allowing me to receive pats on the back it has become more of a monkey on my back. You see I’m even referring to it in the third person – already!
4 – Ergo, the blog needs to undergo changes and this might well start with cosmetic surgery. I might change its proverbial skin so that I might feel better in my own.
Turn on, tune in or drop out!
Sunday, May 06, 2007
Best of Bill Knott?
DEATH
Going to sleep, I cross my hands on my chest.
They will place my hands like this.
It will look as though I am flying into myself.
(POEM) (CHICAGO) (1967)
If you remember this poem after reading it
Please go to Lincoln Park the corner of Dickens Street and sit
On the bench there where M. and I kissed one night for a few minutes
It was wonderful even if you forget
FAITH
People who get downon their knees to me
are the answer to my prayers.
WRONG
I wish to be misunderstood;
that is,
to be understood from your perspective.
ESCAPE PLAN
I examine
my skin
searching for
the pore
with EXIT
over it
MINOR POEM
The only response
to a child's grave is
to lie down before it and play dead
GOODBYE
If you are still alive when you read this,
close your eyes. I am
under their lids, growing black.
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* poems are reprinted from Bill Knott's site and posted as "READERS' FAVORITES: THE BEST POEMS OF BILL KNOTT". He also notes: " You have my thanks to please download, cutpaste and post, reprint whatever you like from this, or from any page on this blog."
Going to sleep, I cross my hands on my chest.
They will place my hands like this.
It will look as though I am flying into myself.
(POEM) (CHICAGO) (1967)
If you remember this poem after reading it
Please go to Lincoln Park the corner of Dickens Street and sit
On the bench there where M. and I kissed one night for a few minutes
It was wonderful even if you forget
FAITH
People who get downon their knees to me
are the answer to my prayers.
WRONG
I wish to be misunderstood;
that is,
to be understood from your perspective.
ESCAPE PLAN
I examine
my skin
searching for
the pore
with EXIT
over it
MINOR POEM
The only response
to a child's grave is
to lie down before it and play dead
GOODBYE
If you are still alive when you read this,
close your eyes. I am
under their lids, growing black.
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* poems are reprinted from Bill Knott's site and posted as "READERS' FAVORITES: THE BEST POEMS OF BILL KNOTT". He also notes: " You have my thanks to please download, cutpaste and post, reprint whatever you like from this, or from any page on this blog."
Friday, May 04, 2007
Théodore Géricault, 1818–1819
The Raft of the Medusa
Oil on canvas
491 × 717 cm,
193.3 × 282.3 inches

One of the paintings that captured my attention during my first visit at the Loeuvre.
Oil on canvas
491 × 717 cm,
193.3 × 282.3 inches

One of the paintings that captured my attention during my first visit at the Loeuvre.
Thursday, May 03, 2007
I Have Been Meaning to Post This:
"As for elitism, poetry is about the least "elitist" artistic pursuit around: it requires no special equipment, no great monetary investment, and no special training that one can't provide oneself if one is disciplined and determined. It just demands the ability and willingness to read and write seriously and intensively and to think about what one reads and what one writes."
-------------------------------------------------------------Reginald Sheppard
-------------------------------------------------------------Reginald Sheppard
Wednesday, May 02, 2007
Anna Journey
Walking Upright in a Field of Devils
Because billy goats rise to the height of a woman
and walk upright, I saw a field of devils
blue and vertical, horned in the moonlight, heat
lightning in their luminous beards. Because the static
of grackles crying from ball moss in mesquite
meant this could be Italy, though it was the black
fields caught between strip malls
flanking Houston.
It's true that Keats walked further and further
from England into Scotland, and the landscape grew
more grim with every step. Lakes shrunk to a slurp
in each cheek. It's also true
that ships from a distance bob as copper weather-cocks
over a thatch of cottages. True, the prickly pear
is a leper dropping its limbs in the field. What is untrue?
The shape of a lung filled like a trough
might press down on a man's stomach--
he'd write his lover: a bellyache
brief as a devil's beard.
In the field: goat-eyed and planetary,
something about to move, the half-bloomed moon,
a pecked-out tea rose. The sun still hours away
in another century -- morning stalling its laudanum
eyes over a field, a death bed. Bodiless.
Then the rise
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* originally appeared in Shenandoah Vol 56, No. 3 , 2006
Anna Journey teaches creative writing at Virginia Commonwealth University, where she also serves as a contributing editor for the online journal Blackbird. She was the recipient of the 2005 Wabash Prize for Poetry as well as an Academy of American Poets' Prize, and her work as also been featured in FIELD, Gulf Coast and Best New Poets 2006.
Because billy goats rise to the height of a woman
and walk upright, I saw a field of devils
blue and vertical, horned in the moonlight, heat
lightning in their luminous beards. Because the static
of grackles crying from ball moss in mesquite
meant this could be Italy, though it was the black
fields caught between strip malls
flanking Houston.
It's true that Keats walked further and further
from England into Scotland, and the landscape grew
more grim with every step. Lakes shrunk to a slurp
in each cheek. It's also true
that ships from a distance bob as copper weather-cocks
over a thatch of cottages. True, the prickly pear
is a leper dropping its limbs in the field. What is untrue?
The shape of a lung filled like a trough
might press down on a man's stomach--
he'd write his lover: a bellyache
brief as a devil's beard.
In the field: goat-eyed and planetary,
something about to move, the half-bloomed moon,
a pecked-out tea rose. The sun still hours away
in another century -- morning stalling its laudanum
eyes over a field, a death bed. Bodiless.
Then the rise
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* originally appeared in Shenandoah Vol 56, No. 3 , 2006
Anna Journey teaches creative writing at Virginia Commonwealth University, where she also serves as a contributing editor for the online journal Blackbird. She was the recipient of the 2005 Wabash Prize for Poetry as well as an Academy of American Poets' Prize, and her work as also been featured in FIELD, Gulf Coast and Best New Poets 2006.
Monday, April 30, 2007
Dis & Dat
The 2007 Poet Laureate Of The Blogosphere.........is Amy King . Kudos to her. Yours truly ended up in 11th place - which seems just about right considering the caliber of my fellow candidates. Thanks to those of you that voted for me & all the other worthy poets.
NaPoWriMo - I discovered that, when under timeline constraints I couldn't write myself out of a paper bag. Some of the poems that I posted this month were downright abysmal. Still I had fun and broke out of a writer's block that had been going on for some time. Now the trick is to stop writing at the drop of a hat. ...Oops there goes another one.
Erin Bertram is this year's winner of Thorngate Road's Frank O'Hara Award Chapbook Competition! Past winners being: Brent Goodman, Aaron Smith, Stacey Waite, & Charles Jensen.
A sobering thought from Suzanne's blog: "If the bee disappeared off the surface of the globe then man would only have four years of life left. No more bees, no more pollination, no more plants, no more animals, no more man."
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NaPoWriMo - - Roundup
Day 1. The Song Remains the Same
Day 2. To the Woman Crossing on a Red Light
Day 3. The Changeling
Day 4. Losing My Voice
Day 5. Real Men Don't Write Poetry
Day 6. NaPoMo Blues
Day 7. NaPoMo Blues #7
Day 8. Rather Than Bleat
Day 9. A War of Attrition
Day 10. When Poetry Came
Day 11. Do Zombies Sleep?
Day 12. Do Zombies Fall Asleep by Counting Sheep?
Day 13. Poem Pimp
Day 14. Patellar Reflex
Day 15. The Voice I do Not Have
Day 16. DUD
Day 17. This is a Non-Poem
Day 18. Talking ‘Bout my MSN Generation
Day 19. Do Zombies Read Their Own Obituaries?
Day 20. La Morte Des Expos
Day 21. Peccatore
Day 22. Untitled
Day 23. NaPoMo Blues #23
Day 24. NaPoMo Blues #24
Day 25. Presently Untitled
Day 26. Of Patron Saints And Cobblestones
Day 27. One Hundred Elvises And a Gadfly
Day 28. 3 Haikus #28
Day 29. 3 Haikus #29
Day 30. 3 Haikus #30
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* Don't tick me off or I'll post them all over again!
Day 2. To the Woman Crossing on a Red Light
Day 3. The Changeling
Day 4. Losing My Voice
Day 5. Real Men Don't Write Poetry
Day 6. NaPoMo Blues
Day 7. NaPoMo Blues #7
Day 8. Rather Than Bleat
Day 9. A War of Attrition
Day 10. When Poetry Came
Day 11. Do Zombies Sleep?
Day 12. Do Zombies Fall Asleep by Counting Sheep?
Day 13. Poem Pimp
Day 14. Patellar Reflex
Day 15. The Voice I do Not Have
Day 16. DUD
Day 17. This is a Non-Poem
Day 18. Talking ‘Bout my MSN Generation
Day 19. Do Zombies Read Their Own Obituaries?
Day 20. La Morte Des Expos
Day 21. Peccatore
Day 22. Untitled
Day 23. NaPoMo Blues #23
Day 24. NaPoMo Blues #24
Day 25. Presently Untitled
Day 26. Of Patron Saints And Cobblestones
Day 27. One Hundred Elvises And a Gadfly
Day 28. 3 Haikus #28
Day 29. 3 Haikus #29
Day 30. 3 Haikus #30
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* Don't tick me off or I'll post them all over again!
Friday, April 27, 2007
Thursday, April 26, 2007
Wednesday, April 25, 2007
Bill Knott Speaks Out
This was posted today over at Bill Knott's
"VOTE FOR ME
*please go to this website and vote for me to be blog
laureate: BloggingPoet.com
i'm not on the roster of nominees, so post a vote for me as a write-in candidate . . .
by definition only a blog poet can be blog laureate, and none of the current nominees are blog poets . . .
none of the nominees listed on the ballot are eligible for the post, because they're not blog poets . . .
they're not blog poets because they don't publish their poetry on their blogs . . .
i may not be worthy of bloglaureatehood, but at least i publish my poetry on my blog, which ergo makes me a blog poet . . .
you can't be a blog poet if you don't publish your poetry on your blog . . .
that's a fact, and no ad hominem aspersions of me will change it . . ."
Posted on BloggingPoet.com on 4/23/2007 at 4:22 by Anonymous
do they publish their poetry on their blogs? all of it? i have posted all of mine on my blog, or am in the process of doing it . . . I've posted hundreds of poems from over forty years of writing poetry . . . have any of these nominees published to the same degree on their blogs? how can you be a blog poet if you don't publish your poetry (all of it) on your blog??? most of your nominees are dead tree poets, not blog poets
Posted on 4/23/2007 at 4:30 by Anonymous
oops forget to add my name to the comment above: Bill Knott
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Dear Bill,
I respect the fact that you have published and continue to publish your poetry on your Blog. Disseminating your poetry for public consumption is commendable and certainly (in my opinion) adheres to the spirit of the medium. I must also admit that I enjoy reading the poetry on your blog. That you have not been nominated for this honor is unfortunate. But I don't see how denigrating those that have been nominated - thus belittling the process and title changes that fact.
I do not believe that I belong on such a list of poets or that there is any danger, any time soon, of me being elected Poet Laureate of the Blogosphere. I am sure that whomever is elected will be a much worthier candidate than myself. I am relatively new to the PoBiz and am neither an MFA student nor educator in creative writing. I am not a "dead tree poet" in that I have not been published, although the thought that I should be has crossed my mind on several occasions. I publish most, if not all, my poetry on my blog in a series of posts that I call "Poems in Vitro".
Someone on an on-line poetry workshop once informed me that I was a much better critic of the literary genre than practitioner and that I would never amount to anything as a poet. I am, I hope, in the process of proving that assertion to be fallacious.
Finally, while I may not agree with your contention, I believe you have every right to voice your opinion. However, I do not understand how deriding this ethernet election, which only appears to spotlight the poet online and furthers "Poetry" (in this relatively new medium) can coincide with your obvious love for and devotion to Ars Poetica.
Best Regards
Nick Bruno
"VOTE FOR ME
*please go to this website and vote for me to be blog
laureate: BloggingPoet.com
i'm not on the roster of nominees, so post a vote for me as a write-in candidate . . .
by definition only a blog poet can be blog laureate, and none of the current nominees are blog poets . . .
none of the nominees listed on the ballot are eligible for the post, because they're not blog poets . . .
they're not blog poets because they don't publish their poetry on their blogs . . .
i may not be worthy of bloglaureatehood, but at least i publish my poetry on my blog, which ergo makes me a blog poet . . .
you can't be a blog poet if you don't publish your poetry on your blog . . .
that's a fact, and no ad hominem aspersions of me will change it . . ."
Posted on BloggingPoet.com on 4/23/2007 at 4:22 by Anonymous
do they publish their poetry on their blogs? all of it? i have posted all of mine on my blog, or am in the process of doing it . . . I've posted hundreds of poems from over forty years of writing poetry . . . have any of these nominees published to the same degree on their blogs? how can you be a blog poet if you don't publish your poetry (all of it) on your blog??? most of your nominees are dead tree poets, not blog poets
Posted on 4/23/2007 at 4:30 by Anonymous
oops forget to add my name to the comment above: Bill Knott
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Dear Bill,
I respect the fact that you have published and continue to publish your poetry on your Blog. Disseminating your poetry for public consumption is commendable and certainly (in my opinion) adheres to the spirit of the medium. I must also admit that I enjoy reading the poetry on your blog. That you have not been nominated for this honor is unfortunate. But I don't see how denigrating those that have been nominated - thus belittling the process and title changes that fact.
I do not believe that I belong on such a list of poets or that there is any danger, any time soon, of me being elected Poet Laureate of the Blogosphere. I am sure that whomever is elected will be a much worthier candidate than myself. I am relatively new to the PoBiz and am neither an MFA student nor educator in creative writing. I am not a "dead tree poet" in that I have not been published, although the thought that I should be has crossed my mind on several occasions. I publish most, if not all, my poetry on my blog in a series of posts that I call "Poems in Vitro".
Someone on an on-line poetry workshop once informed me that I was a much better critic of the literary genre than practitioner and that I would never amount to anything as a poet. I am, I hope, in the process of proving that assertion to be fallacious.
Finally, while I may not agree with your contention, I believe you have every right to voice your opinion. However, I do not understand how deriding this ethernet election, which only appears to spotlight the poet online and furthers "Poetry" (in this relatively new medium) can coincide with your obvious love for and devotion to Ars Poetica.
Best Regards
Nick Bruno
Tuesday, April 24, 2007
NaPoWriMo: # 23 & #24
#23
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#24
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#24
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*just some random thoughts scribbled down - running on empty here in MTL.!
Sunday, April 22, 2007
Lay a Little Lovin' on me
2007 Poet Laureate Of The Blogosphere Voting Begins
Listed below are the eligible candidates for the 3rd annual Poet Laureate Of The Blogosphere election. Previous winners are Jilly Dybka & Ron Silliman. Nominations and rules may be found here.
The Poets:
Bob Hazelton of AveragePoet.com
Steven Schroeder of poetry, philosophy, poetics...
Laurel K Dodge of Possum
Michael Parker of Michael Parker's Journal
Collin Kelley of Collin Kelley
Alex Gildzen of Arroyo Chamisa
Sherry Chandler of SherryChandler.com
Sam Rasnake of sam of the ten thousand things
Levari of Night Book
Sandra Beasley of Chicks Dig Poetry
Kasey Silem Mohammad of Lime Tree
Rebbecca Loudon of Radish King
Rob Mackenzie of Surroundings
Helen Losse of Windows Toward the World
Pris Campbell of Songs To A Midnight Sky
Amy King of AmyKing.org
Lorna Dee Cervantes of Lorna Dee Cervantes
Nick Bruno of They Shoot Poets - Don't They?
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Thanks to Billy the Blogging Poet for setting this all up.
Listed below are the eligible candidates for the 3rd annual Poet Laureate Of The Blogosphere election. Previous winners are Jilly Dybka & Ron Silliman. Nominations and rules may be found here.
The Poets:
Bob Hazelton of AveragePoet.com
Steven Schroeder of poetry, philosophy, poetics...
Laurel K Dodge of Possum
Michael Parker of Michael Parker's Journal
Collin Kelley of Collin Kelley
Alex Gildzen of Arroyo Chamisa
Sherry Chandler of SherryChandler.com
Sam Rasnake of sam of the ten thousand things
Levari of Night Book
Sandra Beasley of Chicks Dig Poetry
Kasey Silem Mohammad of Lime Tree
Rebbecca Loudon of Radish King
Rob Mackenzie of Surroundings
Helen Losse of Windows Toward the World
Pris Campbell of Songs To A Midnight Sky
Amy King of AmyKing.org
Lorna Dee Cervantes of Lorna Dee Cervantes
Nick Bruno of They Shoot Poets - Don't They?
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Thanks to Billy the Blogging Poet for setting this all up.
Saturday, April 21, 2007
NaPoWriMo Update - For Those of You Keeping Score
Day 1. The Song Remains the Same
Day 2. To the Woman Crossing on a Red Light
Day 3. The Changeling
Day 4. Losing My Voice
Day 5. Real Men Don't Write Poetry
Day 6. NaPoMo Blues
Day 7. NaPoMo Blues #7
Day 8. Rather Than Bleat
Day 9. A War of Attrition
Day 10. When Poetry Came
Day 11. Do Zombies Sleep?
Day 12. Do Zombies Fall Asleep by Counting Sheep?
Day 13. Poem Pimp
Day 14. Patellar Reflex
Day 15. The Voice I do Not Have
Day 16. DUD
Day 17. This is a Non-Poem
Day 18. Talking ‘Bout my MSN Generation
Day 19. Do Zombies Read Their Own Obituaries?
Day 20. La Morte Des Expos
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* If you missed any of these consider yourself lucky
Day 2. To the Woman Crossing on a Red Light
Day 3. The Changeling
Day 4. Losing My Voice
Day 5. Real Men Don't Write Poetry
Day 6. NaPoMo Blues
Day 7. NaPoMo Blues #7
Day 8. Rather Than Bleat
Day 9. A War of Attrition
Day 10. When Poetry Came
Day 11. Do Zombies Sleep?
Day 12. Do Zombies Fall Asleep by Counting Sheep?
Day 13. Poem Pimp
Day 14. Patellar Reflex
Day 15. The Voice I do Not Have
Day 16. DUD
Day 17. This is a Non-Poem
Day 18. Talking ‘Bout my MSN Generation
Day 19. Do Zombies Read Their Own Obituaries?
Day 20. La Morte Des Expos
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* If you missed any of these consider yourself lucky
Friday, April 20, 2007
Thursday, April 19, 2007
Wednesday, April 18, 2007
Tagged by Sam
Here’s the tag: Five poetry collections you may not have read but certainly must:
Richard Hugo, “The Lady in Kicking Horse Reservoir”
Thomas Lux, “Selected Poems”
Dan Pagis, “Variable Directions: The Selected Poems of Dan Pagis”
Sharon Olds, “The Dead and the Living“
Yehuda Amichai, “Selected Poetry of Yehuda Amichai”
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The collections, for whatever reason, should be a bit off the beaten path. And need not have caused the earth to open and swallow you whole.
I'm not sure how far "off the beaten path" these collections are, but at least they're not on the main thoroughfare.
*If you haven't been tagged and you're on my blog-roll consider yourself tagged
Richard Hugo, “The Lady in Kicking Horse Reservoir”
Thomas Lux, “Selected Poems”
Dan Pagis, “Variable Directions: The Selected Poems of Dan Pagis”
Sharon Olds, “The Dead and the Living“
Yehuda Amichai, “Selected Poetry of Yehuda Amichai”
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The collections, for whatever reason, should be a bit off the beaten path. And need not have caused the earth to open and swallow you whole.
I'm not sure how far "off the beaten path" these collections are, but at least they're not on the main thoroughfare.
*If you haven't been tagged and you're on my blog-roll consider yourself tagged
I'd Walk a Mile for a Camel
Man and Camel
by Mark Strand
On the eve of my fortieth birthday
I sat on the porch having a smoke
when out of the blue a man and a camel
happened by. Neither uttered a sound
at first, but as they drifted up the street
and out of town the two of them began to sing.
Yet what they sang is still a mystery to me-
the words were indistinct and the tune
too ornamental to recall. Into the desert
they went and as they went their voices
rose as one above the sifting sound
of windblown sand. The wonder of their singing,
its elusive blend of man and camel, seemed
an ideal image for all uncommon couples.
Was this the night that I had waited for
so long? I wanted to believe it was,
but just as they were vanishing, the man
and camel ceased to sing, and galloped
back to town. They stood before my porch,
staring up at me with beady eyes, and said:
"You ruined it. You ruined it forever."
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Excerpt from MAN AND CAMEL. © 2006 by Mark Strand.
Alfred A. Knopf, a division of Random House, Inc.
Edward Byrne on Strand's "Man And Camel":
"The title poem fits into the first section as a typical surrealist piece in which humor and absurdity are employed for effect and the poem closes with a final phrase or sentence akin to a punch line. In this poem a speaker who pauses to smoke a cigarette on his porch is approached by a man and a camel. ... On occasions like this, Strand seems to suggest readers should enjoy imagined art for what it presents rather than analyzing for underlying layers of messages or self-fulfillment. Nevertheless, an irony presents itself, as no poet’s poems invite such scrutiny any more than Mark Strand’s surrealist lyrics. Yet, Strand’s comical and self-mocking poems, whether they are funny fables or bizarre vignettes, frequently seem to me the least engaging upon repeated readings, sounding almost like old jokes told a second time. Even the elliptical phrases from the first section that at times appear reminiscent of Wallace Stevens’s poetry do not linger as long or as well as the more meditative and introspective monologues later in the collection might. In fact, one wishes this volume’s title instead spotlighted an example of the more substantial poems from the last two sections of the book."
Monday, April 16, 2007
2007 Pulitzer Prize For Poetry
'Native Guard,' by Natasha Trethewey
In her introduction to Trethewey's book "Domestic Work," Rita Dove said, "Trethewey eschews the Polaroid instant, choosing to render the unsuspecting yearnings and tremulous hopes that accompany our most private thoughts." (poets.org)
Letter Home
by Natasha Trethewey
--New Orleans, November 1910
Four weeks have passed since I left, and still
I must write to you of no work. I've worn down
the soles and walked through the tightness
of my new shoes calling upon the merchants,
their offices bustling. All the while I kept thinking
my plain English and good writing would secure
for me some modest position Though I dress each day
in my best, hands covered with the lace gloves
you crocheted--no one needs a girl. How flat
the word sounds, and heavy. My purse thins.
I spend foolishly to make an appearance of quiet
industry, to mask the desperation that tightens
my throat. I sit watching--
though I pretend not to notice--the dark maids
ambling by with their white charges. Do I deceive
anyone? Were they to see my hands, brown
as your dear face, they'd know I'm not quite
what I pretend to be. I walk these streets
a white woman, or so I think, until I catch the eyes
of some stranger upon me, and I must lower mine,
a negress again. There are enough things here
to remind me who I am. Mules lumbering through
the crowded streets send me into reverie, their footfall
the sound of a pointer and chalk hitting the blackboard
at school, only louder. Then there are women, clicking
their tongues in conversation, carrying their loads
on their heads. Their husky voices, the wash pots
and irons of the laundresses call to me.
I thought not to do the work I once did, back bending
and domestic; my schooling a gift--even those half days
at picking time, listening to Miss J--. How
I'd come to know words, the recitations I practiced
to sound like her, lilting, my sentences curling up
or trailing off at the ends. I read my books until
I nearly broke their spines, and in the cotton field,
I repeated whole sections I'd learned by heart,
spelling each word in my head to make a picture
I could see, as well as a weight I could feel
in my mouth. So now, even as I write this
and think of you at home, Goodbye
is the waving map of your palm, is
a stone on my tongue.
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2002 by Natasha Trethewey - from Bellocq's Ophelia : Graywolf Press, Saint Paul, Minnesota.
Saturday, April 14, 2007
32 Poems - Vol 5 - Issue 1

The fact is that I have just read 32 Poems from cover to cover and marvelled at the diversity that I found between the aforementioned. Within I discovered what might easily be construed as snippets from the Theatre of the Absurd - a place where we all share the view that man is inhabiting a universe with which he is out of key. Its meaning is indecipherable and his place within it is without purpose. He is bewildered, troubled and obscurely threatened.
I.E.: Christian Nagle's - "Things My Father Taught Me"
4. "If it looks like it's going to hurt, leave early"
9. "People with a little power are extremely dangerous
----Belgian train conductors have a little power "
14. Certain people have deceitful hands.Type when you can.
Or: Daniel Nester's - "Queries"
"Don't loomers always appear from overhead?"
"Aren't all the horses in Hades, in fact, fiery?
"Can roadkill really fart--that is, be flatulent--after they're dead?"
"Isn't all gloom insufferable?"
"Aren't all shadows ominous to some degree?"
"The moon has always been pale, yes?"
Then within the same volume we feast on morsels of the secular:
I.e.: Joanne Diaz - "While Reading Ovid's Amores"
"...Perhaps//on a breezy day--I like to imagine
sometime in 1968--a reader left
this book on his couch to go
for a walk, and in his absence
his cat rubbed its ears against the pages"
Or - Robin Beth Schaer's - "Hollow"
You fill the closets and drawers, fold
and wait. In the pines between our homes,
your wife holds my ear against her belly;
And still in - Jane Springer's - "Boxes"
Inside that box there was nothing but a bit
of someone,
leftover.
But it is in the poetry that reveals the speaker as fragile and broken down to their inner core that speaks the loudest to this reader:
I.e.: Kelly Madigan Erlandson's: " Rarely Have We Seen a Person Fail"
"I have not come to sobriety
of my own accord, and no one does. The alchemy failed
Weary of medicating the problem
with larger and larger doses of the problem, even I
could see the futility. ..."
or Marianne Kunkel's: "Where to Look"
"Lately I have been looking for myself //in everything.
...I sort out the old glasses in my kitchen,
keeping only those which,
unclouded, reflect my face in them."
In the end, for this humble reader the piece by Lucas Howell entitled, " We Are Not In This Together" was, in and of itself, well worth the price of admission:
You take a pinch of earth in your mouth
and though it's what you're made of
the grit is strange between your teeth--
you think, It tastes of salt from long dead seas.
But this field is the beast's pantry, stocked
with clover and sluggish, sunwarmed prey.
When you find this place, the wind
feels like wind against your skin,
and the sky arcs down over a world
you know is just like this, and the word
you want to use is forever--
but you know that isn't true.
You've seen the hoofprint glyphs
in draws where deer bed down.
You're still the only animal that needs
a word for home.
If one were to measure this poem's success ( and this issue of 32 Poems) according to Mary Kinzie's proviso: "What a poet [and editor] keeps out of a poem [issue] is as necessary to its success as what the poet [editor] lets into it.", then this poem and journal appear to have succeeded in fulfilling their purposes.
Thursday, April 12, 2007
Wednesday, April 11, 2007
NaPoWriMo - Day Eleven - # 11
Do Zombies Sleep?
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*second course to follow
Tuesday, April 10, 2007
Sunday, April 08, 2007
NaPoWriMo - Day Eight - Easter Sunday
I am taking a break (don't sound relieved just yet) but will hopefully be returning tomorrow with something. Have a happy holiday. I leave you with this from Knopf Poetry:
Psalm 176
by Stan Rice
When I am appalled
By colossal artifice
The sad word
Is my fellow laborer.
What would make you
Want to forsake miracles
You are too close to.
Why.
My eyes are lights
In an emergency alert
System. The radio static
Sounds like water
Left on in the kitchen.
Not real silence. I
Am better off not having
Lived in the age of
Miracles for I can
Believe in them.
-----------------Selah.
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From: FALSE PROPHET - RandomHouse - 2003
Psalm 176
by Stan Rice
When I am appalled
By colossal artifice
The sad word
Is my fellow laborer.
What would make you
Want to forsake miracles
You are too close to.
Why.
My eyes are lights
In an emergency alert
System. The radio static
Sounds like water
Left on in the kitchen.
Not real silence. I
Am better off not having
Lived in the age of
Miracles for I can
Believe in them.
-----------------Selah.
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From: FALSE PROPHET - RandomHouse - 2003
Friday, April 06, 2007
NaPoWriMo - Day Six - You Got Them... Smoke Them
NaPoMo Blues #7
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*Best I could do on short notice
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*Best I could do on short notice
Thursday, April 05, 2007
NaPoWriMo - Day Five - No.6
Real Men Don't Write Poetry
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*Old title new words
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*Old title new words
Wednesday, April 04, 2007
NaPoWriMo - Day Four - At This Rate I Think I'll Need to Take Some Meds Before This Month is Over
Losing My Voice
need I say more
Tuesday, April 03, 2007
NaPoWriMo - Day Three - This is Already Begining to Sound Like a Sentence
The Changeling
is no longer available
Monday, April 02, 2007
Knopf NaPoMo Poetry - W.S. DiPiero
The Hotel Room Mirror
But who was it, then, that made her so unhappy?
-Madame Bovary
A half-room, foreshortened even more
in the huge speckled armoire glass,
the distance chopped, uncrossable,
between your image and where I stood
twiddling the doorknob before I knew
my own key didn't fit, late night,
your interior so underlit
that bluer shadows oozed your forms.
Already too late, the door
breezed open where your back and thighs
twisted in the green-winged chair,
your body's light coiled, at rest.
Dressed, angled deeper in the surface,
your man pleaded, hands wide, as he flexed
sharp from the bed's protesting edge,
the sheets pinwheeled beneath his weight.
Your glance and his (haphazard,
stark and unconcerned) found mine
in the frame, waiting, though I stayed
invisible to myself, my stare
like your bold forms inhabiting
our depth of field, in the scuffed glass
transcribed. It was already still
too late to save you or be saved.
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From Chinese Apples: New and Selected Poems
Written by W.S. Di Piero
But who was it, then, that made her so unhappy?
-Madame Bovary
A half-room, foreshortened even more
in the huge speckled armoire glass,
the distance chopped, uncrossable,
between your image and where I stood
twiddling the doorknob before I knew
my own key didn't fit, late night,
your interior so underlit
that bluer shadows oozed your forms.
Already too late, the door
breezed open where your back and thighs
twisted in the green-winged chair,
your body's light coiled, at rest.
Dressed, angled deeper in the surface,
your man pleaded, hands wide, as he flexed
sharp from the bed's protesting edge,
the sheets pinwheeled beneath his weight.
Your glance and his (haphazard,
stark and unconcerned) found mine
in the frame, waiting, though I stayed
invisible to myself, my stare
like your bold forms inhabiting
our depth of field, in the scuffed glass
transcribed. It was already still
too late to save you or be saved.
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From Chinese Apples: New and Selected Poems
Written by W.S. Di Piero
Friday, March 30, 2007
Wednesday, March 28, 2007
Friday, March 23, 2007
Wednesday, March 21, 2007
Tuesday, March 20, 2007
Stephen Dobyns
How to Like It
These are the first days of fall. The wind
at evening smells of roads still to be traveled,
while the sound of leaves blowing across the lawns
is like an unsettled feeling in the blood,
the desire to get in a car and just keep driving.
A man and a dog descend their front steps.
The dog says, Let's go downtown and get crazy drunk.
Let's tip over all the trash cans we can find.
This is how dogs deal with the prospect of change.
But in his sense of the season, the man is struck
by the oppressiveness of his past, how his memories
which were shifting and fluid have grown more solid
until it seems he can see remembered faces
caught up among the dark places in the trees.
The dog says, Let's pick up some girls and just
rip off their clothes. Let's dig holes everywhere.
Above his house, the man notices wisps of cloud
crossing the face of the moon. Like in a movie,
he says to himself, a movie about a person
leaving on a journey. He looks down the street
to the hills outside of town and finds the cut
where the road heads north. He thinks of driving
on that road and the dusty smell of the car
heater, which hasn't been used since last winter.
The dog says, Let's go down to the diner and sniff
people's legs. Let's stuff ourselves on burgers.
In the man's mind, the road is empty and dark.
Pine trees press down to the edge of the shoulder,
where the eyes of animals, fixed in his headlights,
shine like small cautions against the night.
Sometimes a passing truck makes his whole car shake.
The dog says, Let's go to sleep. Let's lie down
by the fire and put our tails over our noses.
But the man wants to drive all night, crossing
one state line after another, and never stop
until the sun creeps into his rearview mirror.
Then he'll pull over and rest awhile before
starting again, and at dusk he'll crest a hill
and there, filling a valley, will be the lights
of a city entirely new to him.
But the dog says, Let's just go back inside.
Let's not do anything tonight. So they
walk back up the sidewalk to the front steps.
How is it possible to want so many things
and still want nothing? The man wants to sleep
and wants to hit his head again and again
against a wall. Why is it all so difficult?
But the dog says, Let's go make a sandwich.
Let's make the tallest sandwich anyone's ever seen.
And that's what they do and that's where the man's
wife finds him, staring into the refrigerator
as if into the place where the answers are kept—
the ones telling why you get up in the morning
and how it is possible to sleep at night,
answers to what comes next and how to like it.
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*source - Issue 26 — The Cortland Review
These are the first days of fall. The wind
at evening smells of roads still to be traveled,
while the sound of leaves blowing across the lawns
is like an unsettled feeling in the blood,
the desire to get in a car and just keep driving.
A man and a dog descend their front steps.
The dog says, Let's go downtown and get crazy drunk.
Let's tip over all the trash cans we can find.
This is how dogs deal with the prospect of change.
But in his sense of the season, the man is struck
by the oppressiveness of his past, how his memories
which were shifting and fluid have grown more solid
until it seems he can see remembered faces
caught up among the dark places in the trees.
The dog says, Let's pick up some girls and just
rip off their clothes. Let's dig holes everywhere.
Above his house, the man notices wisps of cloud
crossing the face of the moon. Like in a movie,
he says to himself, a movie about a person
leaving on a journey. He looks down the street
to the hills outside of town and finds the cut
where the road heads north. He thinks of driving
on that road and the dusty smell of the car
heater, which hasn't been used since last winter.
The dog says, Let's go down to the diner and sniff
people's legs. Let's stuff ourselves on burgers.
In the man's mind, the road is empty and dark.
Pine trees press down to the edge of the shoulder,
where the eyes of animals, fixed in his headlights,
shine like small cautions against the night.
Sometimes a passing truck makes his whole car shake.
The dog says, Let's go to sleep. Let's lie down
by the fire and put our tails over our noses.
But the man wants to drive all night, crossing
one state line after another, and never stop
until the sun creeps into his rearview mirror.
Then he'll pull over and rest awhile before
starting again, and at dusk he'll crest a hill
and there, filling a valley, will be the lights
of a city entirely new to him.
But the dog says, Let's just go back inside.
Let's not do anything tonight. So they
walk back up the sidewalk to the front steps.
How is it possible to want so many things
and still want nothing? The man wants to sleep
and wants to hit his head again and again
against a wall. Why is it all so difficult?
But the dog says, Let's go make a sandwich.
Let's make the tallest sandwich anyone's ever seen.
And that's what they do and that's where the man's
wife finds him, staring into the refrigerator
as if into the place where the answers are kept—
the ones telling why you get up in the morning
and how it is possible to sleep at night,
answers to what comes next and how to like it.
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*source - Issue 26 — The Cortland Review
Sunday, March 18, 2007
Thursday, March 15, 2007
Birds do it; Bees do it; Even Wannabe Poets do it...
The Competition for Best New Poets 2007 will open on April 15, 2007.
BNP Blurb: From April 15 to June 15 of each year, any poet meeting our eligibility requirements may nominate their own work by sending us up to two poems. These nominations will require an entry fee of $8, which will go toward paying readers and offsetting some of the publishing costs for the anthology. All entries for the Open Competition must use our online system. We judge all entries blindly, so Open Competition entries are mixed in with nominations from literary magazines and writing programs. Our readers have no real way of knowing which source an entry comes from, and the significant number of Open Competition selections reflects that: we do our best to judge each poem on its own terms.
Thanks to those of you who responded to my request.
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