Very nice poem. I like how cutting hair reflects much deeper on a relationship between father and son, especially when you say the cut doesn't sting as much as father's disdain.
This one still needs work; but thanks, Shahin.
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Very nice poem.
I like how cutting hair reflects much deeper on a relationship between father and son, especially when you say the cut doesn't sting as much as father's disdain.
This one still needs work; but thanks, Shahin.
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