You've got something there. Although for some reason I was wanting the last line to be "undertow" rather than "weave." Maybe it was the lake you mentioned earlier.
Thanks for the suggestion for the poem. This one literally wrote itself out. I always wonder about poems that seem to have a life of their own.... Hope that you had a nice St. Paddy's.
Shann,
I'm a corned beef & coleslaw fan myself. Hope you also had a nice one.
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You've got something there. Although for some reason I was wanting the last line to be "undertow" rather than "weave." Maybe it was the lake you mentioned earlier.
Happy day to you!
I made corned beef and cabbage but mostly because it was on sale- my husband and son loved it- and they can make sandwiches all day tomorrow.
Collin,
Thanks for the suggestion for the poem. This one literally wrote itself out. I always wonder about poems that seem to have a life of their own.... Hope that you had a nice St. Paddy's.
Shann,
I'm a corned beef & coleslaw fan myself. Hope you also had a nice one.
I like it! But "cerulean skies"...a bit overused. (Try Googling it.)
Michael,
Thanks for stopping by and reading.
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