Eintou

Tuesday, May 09, 2006

Eintou

The Gleaners

They stand
bent over like
a Millet painting by
the train tracks picking dandelion
greens before they flower
as though their time
had come.

7 comments:

Nick said...: Guilty on all counts. I became enchanted with this form and thought that I give it a go. Thanks for taking notice.; 7:50 AM, May 10, 2006
Cheryl and Janet Snell said...: Lovely, Nick!; 6:42 PM, May 10, 2006
Nick said...: Thanks, Cheryl! How nice to see you here.; 8:33 PM, May 10, 2006
Unknown said...: good work found here....; 2:33 AM, May 12, 2006
Nick said...: Thanks, Shann!; 8:28 AM, May 12, 2006
Patry Francis said...: This says so much in so few lines. Thank you.; 11:15 AM, May 12, 2006
Nick said...: Thanks for saying so, Patry. Grazie.; 1:12 PM, May 12, 2006