Tuesday, May 09, 2006

Eintou


The Gleaners

They stand
bent over like
a Millet painting by
the train tracks picking dandelion
greens before they flower
as though their time
had come.

7 comments:

Nick said...

Guilty on all counts. I became enchanted with this form and thought that I give it a go. Thanks for taking notice.

Cheryl and Janet Snell said...

Lovely, Nick!

Nick said...

Thanks, Cheryl! How nice to see you here.

Unknown said...

good work found here....

Nick said...

Thanks, Shann!

Patry Francis said...

This says so much in so few lines. Thank you.

Nick said...

Thanks for saying so, Patry. Grazie.